Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Quarter One Reflection

        In my forty book challenge, I just finished my sixteenth book, Witness by Karen Hesse. In the beginning of the school year, we didn't get that much homework, so I read a lot. And as a lot I mean finishing books in like two days, flying through about two-three books a week. I am currently reading A Break With Charity, by Ann Rinaldi, which is about the Salem Witch Trials. I have to say out of all the books I have read is The Outsiders by S.E. Hinton because the characters seemed so real and easy to connect with. 
         Strategies that have benefited me in order to be successful this year so far have been copying my vocab on Friday, studying it throughout the weekend since it is the only time I can study with my mom. Then during the week, I do my vocab on Monday, and annotate my article if we receive one that day. On Tuesday I'll study my vocab and read from my book, and then Wednesday I would work on my AoW until youth group. Thursday is when I will study more vocab and finish my AoW. By doing this strategy, I get good grades on my vocab test and I complete my AoW on time. 
         My research skills have improved because, before I would just type the question on Google and look for the answer, not reading the rest of my information. Now I try to not do that so I can get more background knowledge of what I'm learning by reading the entire article and mentally annotating. I do this in case another question asked what is inside the article. Another thing that I do that I didn't do when I was researching before is making my own, quick and easy organizer, or taking little notes about what I am researching on if there is no organizer provided. Before, I would just answer the questions or do an essay by looking back and forth between the book or the primary source of information.
         The world will eat you up if you do not do what you can in order to succeed. I learned this last year in the course of Mrs. Larson's class. In seventh grade, I would ignore my vocab like the plague and then become enemies with it on Thursdays, this goes along with my social studies AoW, and ELA AoW. This is why I would receive mostly low nineties or eighties and then struggle to receive at least a low A. But now that I learned more about time management, I try to exercise it and seperate time for it during the day so I can do all that needs to be done without stressing. 
          In contrast to my seventh grade blogs and my summer blogs, I believe my writing skills grew. In blogs before, I wasn't as creative or descriptive in describing situations, or grabbing the readers attention. For example, in one of my blogs on Heat by Mike Lupica, I was comparing and differentiating the main character from one of the gym teachers. I wrote, "Michael is a funny character, but can easily turn serious just like Mr. Joseph is. Michael has been through a hard time and had the feeling of loss, like Mr. Joseph." Instead of generalizing that he was funny and can easily turn serious, I could have pulled examples from the book that showed he was funny and serious. Now that I learned more about descriptive details, I practice it more throughout my blogs. For example, "On page one and two, he discusses a specific woman that  had perseverance to continue to Sudan. According to Mawi, "she pressed on and on, and soon her limp became a crawl,...,but still, she kept on crawling. For what choice does a refugee have?"" Now, I could have just said that Mawi described a specific woman with a strong, persevering spirit, but instead, I pulled out text from the book. 
            

Thursday, October 15, 2015

Blog for Mon. Oct. 12th- "Tale of Despereaux"

Prompt: Draw a comic strip of what you just read
Pages Read: 0-89

Pg. 27 Ch. 4
In this picture is Princess Pea, her father the king, and Despereaux. Despereaux is in the little mouse hole next to Pea's bed. I chose to draw this scene from the book because it is really what gets Despereaux in the trouble he is later in the book.
Princess Pea lays down while the king sings her to sleep. Despereaux hears the sweet melody of the king's music and listens from the edge of the hole. 
Despereaux: Oh! It sounds like honey! 
When Desperaux's older siblings were trying to teach Despereaux how to act like a mouse, they told him to sniff for cheese, and listen for crumbs falling. Instead of hearing crumbs, he heard the King playing the music. He described it to sound like honey, which his brother tells him nothing can sound like honey. This cause Despereaux to follow his ears and find where the honey sound was coming from.

Pg. 28 Ch. 4
In this picture, I drew Despereaux now outside of the mouse hole, standing on his hind legs next to Pea's bed. Princess Pea is now sitting on her knees pointing the mouse out the her father who cannot see. Despereaux freezes once he realizes he has broke mouse code and has been caught.
Despereaux was so dazed by the music he forgot all about the mouse code. He fully revealed himself to the king and princess. The princess quickly spotted him. 
Princess Pea: Ooh! Papa look! A mouse! 
King: Where?
Princess Pea: There!
King: That my dear Pea, is a bug not a mouse. It is too small to be a mouse. 
Princess Pea: Look! He's so afraid, he's shaking! I think he was listening to the music. Play him something papa! 
I stopped here because, I didn't think the rest was of value. The king continued to argue with Pea that Despereaux was indeed a bug, not a mouse. Until he gives in and sings to the mouse and Pea.

Pg. 30-31 Ch. 5
This picture is just a simple drawing of the princess loking down on Desperaux, who is amazed by her beauty. The author states later, "...the mouse fell in love." I feel this also adds onto the big conflict that rises up later during the trial between the mouse and the Mouse Council. You probably cannot see the tear drops on Princess Pea's face. This is because later in the chapter, the king finally realized it is not a bug, but a mouse. He tells the mouse to leave, but Despereaux does not leave. The king tries to stomp on him, but Pea stops him, and she begins to cry.
As the king played, Princess Pea looked at Despereaux. He was awed by her beauty. Until Furogh, Despereaux's brother, seen the two in the doorway. He immedieantly went to report to his father, Lester, what he has seen. 
Princess Pea: You're so sweet. You're so tiny. 
Despereaux: Please, do not cry...My name is Despereaux!
Princess Pea: Despereaux? 
Despereaux: I honor you. 


On the left side of the paper is Lester and Antonette, Despereaux's parents. Furough has just told Lester about Despereaux's scandelous incounter with the humans. Lester is very upset about this and says some very harsh unnecessary things. Antonette is more upset with Lester's behave rather than Despereaux's actions. Lester begins to blame Antonette for Despereaux's decisions because she brought in the bad French blood to his system.
Lester was mad and Antonette was upset with the way Lester was reacting. Lester, in Antonette's words, was being 'so overdramatic', and summoned the Mouse Council to decide Despereaux's punishment.
Lester: He simply cannot be my son...I will call a special meeting of the mouse council. 
Antonette: What do you mean he is not your son?... Oh you and this coucinl of the mouse. 

The picture on the right side of the drawing is a picture of the Head Mouse sitting at a table with 13 other mice in front of him. This is representing the Mouse Council trial, which will decide the fate of Despereaux. I didn't want to spoil anything for the people who haven't read the rest of the book, so I left it at;
So, the thirteen mice will together decide whether or not Despereaux will be sent to the dungeon. 





Friday, October 9, 2015

"Take a Second Look"

"Take a Second Look"

But no matter how much strangers,
resemble beetles,
They could be Angels,
Given 
To us
By 
God 

Thieves,
Thieves can loot minds, 
Culture
And even 
Bodies.

For once you enter,
You cannot return,
So make your choice carefully 

It starts small, 
With a tiny,
Tiny egg 
But before you know it,
The egg becomes a chicken, 
And the chicken? 
It becomes, 
Cow

Hope? 
Too much hope can lead 
To
In, 
Insanity 

Do you want to reach out?
Or do the covers over your 
Head, do they make 
You 
Hide?
Hide behind the fear?
The fear to make you,
Vulnerable?

Where does true,
True power come from?
True power is not just on what we can take,
True power comes from what we can give

So take a second look, 
At everything around you,
For you cannot judge people,
Places
Objects
And ideas,
Without taking a deeper, second look.